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  _killa_ *inspired by jj lin's song8, _i've come to deliver bad luck_
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Posted: August 17, 2008 08:30 am
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i love her , but she don't ..her feelings towards me change when she met that guy!!
i don't want her to be happy on other guys, i want her to be happy in just me.. only me..

so in order for me to have her back, i threatened her. but i still show my love for her in some way that's bad. i sent her a gift of death.. a blade!

but at that night, she finally decided to escape and leave me all alone .. so i kidnapp her and put her on my storage room..
i made especially for her. that storage room is hwere i put and store all the beautiful things that i gave her, that she returned back... i felt so reckless, so angry.. but i can't and i won't 'cause i love her


and then she was awakened. i offered her food and drinks, but she refuses ,., she wants to go home, back home to where he's new beloved guy awaits him. we exchange harsh words on each other until she finally told me in a very angry tone... that


" i don't love you, and i never did"

my blood rises up to my head, i turned back and walked away.. i locked the storage room so she won't get away..

i need some time to think.. i cried and i cried until my eyes bleed.

if i don't and if i can't have her then no one will.. i took the lethal injection i prepared especially and just for her, i also took the butter knife and went to the storage room.

i opened the door and there i saw her. beautiful as always, too bad that beauty can't be seen by anyone anymore.. i walked towards her with the knife and injection nehind my back,.,.and before she could look at me.. i struck her with the injection and the only thing i heard from her ,.,was


"i'm sorry"

i let a tear drop fell,.,. then she died.. after that i cut her head off but i didn't pull it out yet..


to make the night more memorable i danced with her dead corpse and played piano with it,.,.together like a perfect couple..


and before the clocks strikes midnight i sat her down and pull off her beautiful head



and for the grand finale..i put her head to a glass divider and placed it on the very top,.,.with black and red roses all over it and put a tiara on her head.. that's how much i loved her



i really loved her so much!!!



so now it's been years that passed.. i found you ,.,.and we loved each other,.,.
i knoe you won't leave me like she did! becuase if you do.. i'll make you a part of my death collection!!!!



i love you!!

















i was inspired by jj lin's music! that's why i made up this story!!p

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Posted: August 22, 2008 12:05 pm
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Wow, this could be made into a horror oneshot. blink.gif
What was this song about?

A few problems with spelling and grammar, but it was still visually provocative.


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Posted: June 22, 2009 08:43 pm
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yea i still have a problem with grammatical errors i know
*sigh*

but really a horror oneshot?
what do you mean by that

i forgot the title of the story though
but it's about that....


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Posted: July 02, 2009 09:02 am
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Oh, I meant it reminds me of a manga oneshot/short story.

If you like that kind of genre, there's "Fetish" scanlated by Storm in Heaven. *Adult/Mature*
Fujiwaru Kaoru's (the mangaka) works leave me sad.


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Posted: July 10, 2009 04:57 am
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oh i'll check it out thanks for the compliments


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